Dear diary, today was brilliant I’ll tell you the story. My family and I arrived in Australia. As I walked off the plane I felt a sudden burst of miserable jet lag. I was so tired I just went to bed for ninety minutes. I woke up to a lovely fresh ham sandwich and orange juice. I was so energetic I was climbing all over the place. Then we all went to a safari, it was brilliant. There were hyenas and monkeys everywhere. At the end of the day, just when we were leaving, the clouds went grey as lead and started raining heavily like I had never seen before (And I’m from Ireland!).
Cool story! Your description is great!
I enjoyed reading this keep it up.
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I enjoyed reading the part about burst of miserable jet lag. http://kidblog.org/Mrs_Illume/author/ajay943014/
I found the part where you went to australia and when you said it was raining heavily.
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I liked how at the end, you informed that you were actually from Ireland. Also, you used great adjectives. Good job!
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