Dear Diary
Today I went to the Zoo with Holly and Mia. We arrived at one a clock .We looked at the tigers, the lions, the hippos and the monkeys. But when we squeezed through the crowd of people to the Hyena cage, there was one grey Hyena who looked very miserable. At this zoo they feed the animals sandwiches instead of their normal food. The Hyenas had to climb up a little hill to get their food. As the Zoo Keeper filled the bucket up with sandwiches, all the other Hyenas ran up the hill but this miserable, grey Hyena tried and tried to get up but it just couldn’t get up and the Zoo Keeper was very concerned.
Bye Diary
WOW Avril that is such a good story! Love the way you used the words in such diffrent ways! Well done !
I loved the way you used the prompt. I wonder why the hyena wasn’t able to get up
keep up the creativity!!