Dear Diary
day twelve of being a sandwich .Two days ago I went climbing And I was nearly eaten by a pack of wild hyenas, the Same day someone picked me up and Took me apart my bread , ham ,cheese and salad was scattered everywhere “I’m so miserable” thought the sandwich ”plus my crusts are turning grey,I’m getting old” CRASH! then a giant hand lifted me out to be continued
I like when you said a pack of hyenas
http://kidblog.org/MrMcGintysClass2/author/af3dfb14-f3b6-47e2-963f-747e34f8fcd5/
Wow, that was amazing, how did you come up with that I hope you finish your story. If you want to see my blog, I will leave it here http://kidblog.org/MrMcGintysClass3/author/58a6163f-1014-474e-9e5d-ffc2e7cf76cb/ ok by
I liked this story a lot and it was very creative.
Hello Tomas. Great story. I really like the end when the giant hand came and picked you up.