100 Word Challenge-Week 20-Patrick Ruairí

Dear Diary,

Today it is a miserable day. There is a grey sky and I am stuck in my house watching some documentary about a hyena. I asked my Mom could she make me a sandwich, she said “Get off the sofa and get it yourself!” I didn’t like the sound of that. So I climbed off the sofa and made a sandwich (my favorite, chicken!) then I decided to turn the TV off. It had stopped raining so I ran outside and started playing football. Best day ever!


4 thoughts on “100 Word Challenge-Week 20-Patrick Ruairí

  1. Hellow Patrick I like your story was funnie but when I got to the end. The end was a little plain you could of put there when you went outside you fell in the mud, but I like your story I like how you made it into a diary.

    If you get a chance you should visit my class blog here I will give you the link here http://kidblog.org/MrMcGintysClass3/ and you can go to my blog I will also give you my blog here http://kidblog.org/MrMcGintysClass3/author/05a309b0-6fa8-472b-93c8-e4030acc06c0/

    Sincerly, Kingsonny

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