Dear Diary,
Today it is a miserable day. There is a grey sky and I am stuck in my house watching some documentary about a hyena. I asked my Mom could she make me a sandwich, she said “Get off the sofa and get it yourself!” I didn’t like the sound of that. So I climbed off the sofa and made a sandwich (my favorite, chicken!) then I decided to turn the TV off. It had stopped raining so I ran outside and started playing football. Best day ever!
Hey Patrick
I relly like how you explained the grey sky and how you were stuck in your house . I also like you put diolog in your story.
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Hellow Patrick I like your story was funnie but when I got to the end. The end was a little plain you could of put there when you went outside you fell in the mud, but I like your story I like how you made it into a diary.
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Sincerly, Kingsonny
I like your story very much and I like how you used good words to describe your story.And you used capitle words Visit my blog it is here http://kidblog.org/MrMcGintysClass3/author/d684759e-4d69-4f96-aea2-23ad17c63f6e/ thx
sincerly alejandro
I like how you used the 5 words.