Today I went to the zoo, even though it was a miserable day and the clouds didn’t look like they were going to change from a dull grey. I could not complain though. It was a one hour to the zoo but when we arrived we had lunch, ham sandwiches my favourite. We went in and saw the lions first seeing the lions climb up trees and eat heads of small dead cows. My favourite animal was the hyena I thought their laugh was funny.It took two hours to get home because of traffic but I still had a great day.
you should start your story like this. yesterday was the best day ever I went to the zoo.even though it was a miserable day. But your story is wonderful. Come viset my week 20 100 word challenge her is the link to my story. http://kidblog.org/MrMcGintysClass2/d7373310-e2a4-4720-9e4e-6cfb0329627c/100-wc-carlos-versus-the-hyena/
have a a happy day 🙂