Dear Diary,
Today I will fly to Brazil with my friends for the World Cup. The plane ride was okay, I ate a sandwich but I felt miserable after. When the plane landed in Brazil, I had to climb down the stairs and the sky was already grey.
The first game was Brazil V Croatia and it was a fantastic game. My friends had all put bets on the game – except me. [ I didn’t want it to become a habit! ]
The final was – Germany V Argentina. When the final whistle blew, the Germans went crazy! [ The crowd sounded like a crazy hyena! ]
It was great World Cup!
Well done Ken, another really good piece of writing! Niamh
This is a great piece of writing! You used all the required words correctly. I like how you gave reasons and added a explanation.
Keep up the great writing!
Mrs. Varvel
100 WC Team, China