02.08.2018
Dear diary,
It was a miserable day. The hyena and I decided to climb the unusually large hill. We hovered over in our hovering car, jumped out and put on our singing shoes! At the top of the hill was a grey, mouldy sandwich. “This is preposterous!” laughed the hyena even though he was angry. “How dare someone litter like that. When we reached the top, we ate the grey, mouldy sandwich and shortly after we got sick all over the electric tour guide! Now I am sitting in the hospital beside this agitating hyena that won’t stop laughing! See you tomorrow.
This is a fantastic piece of writing. It is really original and has the most wonderful vocabulary, Well Done! Niamh
A super use of the prompt. I can’t imagine why you’d eat the sandwich though. It sounds disgusting. The fact that you’ve ended up ill with a hyena that won’t stop laughing is very funny. A great piece of writing, keep up the good work!
Thank you very much Sue!
Hi Patricia – greetings from suburban Chicago, IL USA
A very imaginative way to use the prompts for your 100WC this week. It was a fascinating tale from the beginning to the end! Keep up with the great ideas!
Wonderful job! I loved the part were you have to sit in the hospital bed, because the hyena won’t stop laughing.
Keep up the Epic work!
Sarah