One night as the crew were sleeping a giant metal ball burst through the side of the ship. “We’re under attack” screeched one of the men. “Pirates!” shouted another. There were loud sounds of gun shots on the upper deck. I ran up, I could see that the crew of the ship beside us was trying to board us! Another canon ball hit the ship, I grabbed the wheel and turned the ship around but since it was still dark out I didn’t know where I was going the ship was quickly beached on the island of Inis Oirr. There was only one survivor of the attack, me!
Tomas Rory
That was a great story and I liked how you said all those details about the gunshots and the cannon shots.
By the way I am from Watonville, California, U.S.A.
And my blog address is http://kidblog.org/MrMcGintysClass3/author/7323e84e-8269-493f-80d5-15510cd2518f/ my name is Jesus
Thank you for leaving me that nice comment
Nollaig Shona = Merry Christmas