8.3.1960
It was a stormy night, I was sailing to Galway for Paddy’s day. It was just after one in the morning, it was very early. It was a stormy night I was sailing the ship and I could see the lights of Galway. Suddenly I heard a noise from the bottom of the ship. All of the other crew members where still asleep so I thought that I had imagined it. I went down to the galley to get a drink and then a wave of water hit my face. After about one minute a massive wave hit the boat and we flipped on to an island. All I heard was John and then it went black.
I liked your story, it was nice and how you have not run on sentence.
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Rigoberto
Watsonville,california u.s.a
Hi Rigoberto thank you for the comment.
Nollaig Shona=Gaeilge Wesolych swiat = Polish.
This means happy Christmas in Irish and Polish
HI Thomas I really liked your story specially when a wave hit the boat.
Im Alejandro IM a 6th Grader,From Lakeview Middle School,Watsonville,CA,U.S.A
If your interested please check my blog listed below
http://kidblog.org/MrMcGintysClass3/author/d684759e-4d69-4f96-aea2-23ad17c63f6e/
Hello Thomas. I like your story it’s very great. My favorite part is when you went down to the gallery to get and drink and then a wave of water hit your face. I can’t wait for your next writing. Keep up the great work.
Oh hey can I ask you some questions? Look down below.
What is Ireland like? How is Ireland? Do you guys play any sports over there? Do you have any sports teams you like? How many brothers or sisters do you have?
I like playing football. You should search up american football. My favorite thing to do is to play video games and play football with my brothers. I have two brothers. My favorite team for football is the 49ers. And my favorite soccer team is FC Barcelona. By the way you should check out my blog – http://kidblog.org/MrMcGintysClass5/author/95bb4f91-2173-43f3-b2ab-420139a015ec/
Sincerly, Christian. Watsonville, California, USA.
Hi Christian
Ireland is a very nice country. But in the winter it can get really bad. My favorite soccer team is Roma my favorite American Footbal team is The Rams.
Thanks for the comments
Nollaig Shona That is Irish for happy Cristmas
wosolych swiat That is Polish for happy Christmas
Sorry every one i did not change the name to Thomas Hugo. I am very sorry about that
Nollaig Shona