As i was walking along the road, I saw an old ship wreck there. I went over to it and admired it. I stood there for a few minutes. I screamed It was the same boat that i saw on the night , the night I herd the big bang. It scared me a lot I ran home to my granddad. He said that he sailed on it back in the day. He said that the captain was drunk and he crashed into the boulders. And that’s the story of the great Passy.
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I really liked how you used sensory details. When I close my eyes I can see your granddad on the ship.
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