One day I was walking on the west coast of Ireland. It was the 8th of March 1960 suddenly a big storm came in from the North and all of the waves were bigger than me!! Suddenly I ran into a café across the way. I was looking out of the window at the storm. “Oh god!” shouted someone in the café. “Look at the size of that ship” I whispered. Suddenly it CRASHED onto shore!! All of the tables in the café started to shake. Everyone ran out of the café over to the ship. There was only one person alive ………….his name was Mike Tobin. Sadly all of the rest of the crew died…….
Great Patricia, I enjoyed reading your entry this week. What a great ideas. You have used the prompt well. Your ending left me in suspense and I wanted to know what was going to happen next.
Helo Rang,
I love that you went back in time to when the ship was still upon the seas. You’ve used very descriptive language to help your readers put themselves in the setting.
Keep up your writing!
Tracey
Team 100WC
San José, California, US
Thank you for your lovely comments everyone and Nollaig Shona that means Merry Christmas and I hope you all have a nice Christmas and New Year.
Patricia, I see that I confused your name with that of your school. So sorry. Tracey.
Hello Patrica, your story was well thought out with very descriptive writing. The whole entire story was great and no complaints. I’m Rene from Lakeview Middle School, Watsonville, California and here is my blog:http://kidblog.org/MrMcGintysClass3/author/a48051ee-a8e6-49d5-9fbf-bcffe551035b/ hope to hear from you. Again, I am Rene from Lakeview Middle School, Watsonville, Claifornia
Thank you everyone for your lovely comments and Nollaig Shona that means Merry Christmas in Irish.Visit my site at http://rangniamh.edublogs.org/2014/12/11/100-word-challenge-week-15-patricia-roisin/#comments