We walked along the coast of Inis Oirr. Teresa and I walked slowly towards the rusty, old shipwreck that was marooned into the rocks. Carved into the side of the ship was “The Plassy”
“Must be the name of the ship” whispered Teresa.
“Must be” I agreed
I put my foot into a small hole in the side of the ship, the creaking was unbearable. We climbed onto the deck when suddenly the floor broke from beneath us! As we turned around an unusual figure appeared before our eyes! It was the last living crew member from the ship and he said….. “The Plassy is not for you lassies”
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