“Hello I’m captain Scott, I am the captain of the DNU. Today we are taking of from San Francisco in America on the Pacific Ocean and are heading to the Atlantic Ocean . I have 207 crew and 29 barrels of wine. There is a lower deck and a upper deck.We have a chad burn in our control room . My head Chef can cook the most marvelous food you can ever eat . We are hoping to land in Galway . But there is a storm coming and I am worried . The date is 19.12,1960 and we are near Galway but a storm is coming towards us . Something is happening to the chadburn its taking something very strong ahead . Then all I saw was the boat sinking and crashing on Inis Oirr . All of my crew was dead except for one and me.
I really enjoyed your story. I liked how you used good details. Please come check out my blog: http://kidblog.org/MrMcGintysClass2/author/97ade1c9-54b9-4cd5-bb05-2095f06097ae/
Thank you so much Evelyn for the lovely comment . Hope you have a wonderful Christmas and a new year . Nollaig Shona agus athblian na maise duit. Maire Caitriona.I will check out your blog.
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Maire Caitriona
Hi Marie I liked the detail in your story. I also like the ending of your story. I will really like to read your stories.
By the way how is Ireland. I am from Watsonville California. What time does your school end and what time it starts. Come see my Blog: http://kidblog.org/MrMcGintysClass5/author/8d642e56-593c-4727-9d5f-20e9abeaec79/
Hi Maliyah, thank you so much for the lovely comment. I would defiantly check out your blog.
Ireland is lovely but it can be quite cold country.
My school starts at 9.00am and ends at 14.40 pm what about you ?.
Here is a link to my next story. http://rangniamh.edublogs.org/2014/12/11/100-word-challenge-week-15-maire-caitriona/ Hope you have a lovely Christmas and a happy new year. Nollaig Shona agus athblian na maise. Maire Caitriona