One stormy night the Passy and it’s crew were having trouble out on the Atlantic Ocean. After a hour a huge wave swallowed them up. In the morning the ship was wedged up on a pile of rocks. After a week a group of people found it. Some people thought that it was haunted. Nobody dared to go up on it. But one boy decided climbed up on it. People heard screaming and they never saw the boy again.
Marie, I really liked your story and keep up the good work 👌
Marie,
I really enjoyed your story and the details you added. It was especially interesting towards the end, where the boy goes into the ship. I enjoy drawing, swimming, and watching scary movies. What do you like to do? If you’re interested, here’s my blog http://kidblog.org/MrMcGintysClass3/author/6407b73c-5172-41ba-9f1d-3bd248e7899b/
Monserrat,
Lakeview Middle School, Watsonville, California, U.S.A
I really like how at the end of the story you made it suspenseful at the end.
What do you do for fun? Do you have a Xbox one.
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